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Friday, February 26, 2021

Guest Post: Feminist Nonsense in Woke Entertainment, by Moira Greyland Peat

In Hollywood, woke projects abound. Batwoman exists to show us that putting a pretty, capable black actress in the leading role will make us interested in discovering that we are all racists, and that she is perpetually discriminated against. She is described as “wildly undisciplined” as well as being a karate expert, who grew up homeless and now lives in a van down by the river, like that SNL skit.

Furthermore, the notion of a “wildly undisciplined” martial arts expert is simply ridiculous. It would be like a clumsy Jedi master, who constantly dropped his lightsaber, whacking off random body parts as he did.

The writing makes the show absurd. It is not Javicia Leslie’s fault that the scripts are so bad. They are not meant to tell us stories, but to “educate” us.
Instead of writing a story about an INTERESTING black lesbian, they’ve written a story about a woman who is black, a victim, and a lesbian, and has no other characteristics whatsoever. The actress is stuck with a non-character to play, and her potential is wasted.

Similarly, in Star Trek Discovery, Sonequa Martin-Green, who was dynamite in The Walking Dead, is meant to play the part of a walking diversity lecture. If her character had been written to be an interesting human being, the show would have topped the charts. But since it is all about diversity, rather than all about PEOPLE, the show falls flat and has been propped up and propped up.

Sonequa Martin-Green’s character Michael Burnham is unfeminine, somewhat amoral, willing to commit murder when enraged, and her defining characteristic is being AMAAAAAZING. She can do amazing things just because, and is smarter than everyone. She also taught Spock to spock, because apparently his absolutely adequate father mysteriously didn’t teach him with every word and every breath, nor did Spock’s comprehensive education on Vulcan manage to do that. Nope, a few lectures from the amaaaazing Michael Burnham was all it took.

This kind of lazy, foolish writing is becoming a bad habit. Dr. Who, a show which had enjoyed popularity and legendary status for over fifty years, is floundering with the female Dr. Who. Once more, the stories are not about PEOPLE. They are environmental lectures, diversity lectures, and representation lectures, and Dr. Who’s only feminine characteristic is the ability to NAG.

Dr. Who #13, the woman, is sexually ambiguous, has a non-gendered costume which would be absurd on any human being, and she lacks both heroism and character. The show is more about her being female, while lacking any trace of femininity, and less about what she actually DOES.

Most recently, the graphic novels of The High Republic have had an embarrassing start. Despite money poured into their creation, for example strings being pulled to obtain a New York Times bestseller ranking for a book very few people have seen, let alone read, the books are failing. The characters are placeholders to drain the dirty sinkful of representation into.
The parts I have seen do not interest me, because the stories as well as the characters are a big nothing. No purpose, no need to accomplish a goal, no war, little to no conflict, and the primary characteristics of the female characters is to be amazing, and to admire one another. For what? Unclear. The male characters are either fat, or gay, and they are sidelined in favor of the much more important teenaged girls, amazing for some unclear reason.

The defining characteristic of a leading man or woman is heroism. They might look at Ahsoka Tano in The Clone Wars for a cartoon character that is both heroic and fallible, even vulnerable. Heroism means moral virtue, a purpose, and the willingness to sacrifice oneself in the service of something greater.

It has nothing to do with navel-gazing about how “strong in the force” some witless teenager allegedly is! What have they actually DONE?

Firing the writers would be a good start.

Why is the writing on these shows so bad? Could it be that with the focus on the “voices” of people in alternative communities that absolutely anything they come up with is allowed to stand exactly as is?

That in itself belies bigotry, because any “normal” writer would be subjected to many edits and challenges, so the story would be the best it could possibly be. Seeking out writers as checkboxes rather than writers offends the profession. There are plenty of excellent writers of every diverse brand who have become famous for their competence, not for their diversity!

One important issue is the set of assumptions that the writers are saddled with. To begin with, rather than writing stories about people acting like people, the characters are tasked with acting the way that the writers have decided they should, in order to influence our own reactions.

Let us draw a contrast with the “strong female characters” of the previous era. Janeway from Star Trek Voyager was strong, and female, but she remained female. She put on strength to make her crew feel confident in her leadership, but she retained her femininity and her desires for pairbonding and love, even though they could not really be realized in her situation.

One splendid example of this was when she fell in love with a alien who had been trying for some time to find contraband cargo on her ship. He pretended convincingly to defect from his regime, and found out the realities of life on her ship. But when he went back to his regime, hoping to use the information he had found, Janeway had outsmarted him, and he only managed to embarrass himself by claiming he had found contraband, where the containers contained only vegetables.

Yes, she fell in love. Yes, she let the man find out too much. But she also kept her wits about her and put the safety of her crew above her own heart, and it was delightful to see the dastardly alien beaten at his own game.

The assumptions behind Janeway were that although she was strong, she was human, that is, fallible, and still she was female.

In the case of so many other characters written today, the assumptions are that they are infallible, and their femininity is given up in favor of being more sexless.
Their “strength” is invariably physical, and thus unbelievable. Why would a woman who weighs 105 lbs be able to beat a pack of 200 lb stuntmen who could literally break her in half? Why not write these women a way to handle physical conflict which does not require a direct contest to strength?

Worse, their emotional strength is written as being invulnerable, tough, and rigid, lacking any trace of femininity. The only feeling regularly expressed is anger, expressed in an overt masculine style, rather than in a range of more feminine styles, such as snarky humor, cutting remarks, or sidelong putdowns.

No, once again, the women of today are written to eschew any sign of actual feminine characteristics. It is almost as though the real assumption is that being female is bad, and the only way to be an acceptable female is to be as male as humanly possibly, while remaining physically female.

Of course, for some writers today, even looking physically female is too much. Breasts must be reduced or eliminated, lest men actually be attracted to the women who have them. The “male gaze” is not only normal, but universal, and yet women are still supposed to not look like women, or react to men like a woman would, with attention, physical responses, and even, perhaps, interest.

No. Women in major TV and movies today are meant to be as mannish as possible, and that means they do not want relationships with men. Several major female stars, like Batwoman, are supposed to desire women only, and to have promiscuous, visible sexual encounters with them.

We are meant not only to accept that huge numbers of lesbians exist everywhere, as though there were more lesbians than straight women, but we are also meant to admire, and if possible, to emulate them. We are meant to accept that defeminzed women are normal, and straight relationships are either abnormal or unhealthy, and that strong women, by and large, do not breed. Or marry. Or have relationships with men.

Worst of all, if we have relationships with men, they are either submissive men, like Book and Michael Burnham, who in reality are quite intolerable for strong women, or maniacs, like Kylo Ren and Rey, who kissed once before he died... because she killed him.

In my own background, as the daughter of Marion Zimmer Bradley, a famous feminist lesbian author, I knew that she thought that the guy should not ever “get the girl” at the end of the story, and instead of having a pairbond, women were supposed to walk off into the sunset to go get self-actualized or some nonsense like that.

She brought me up to believe that my desire to marry and to have a family was awful, a failure, and in reality I should be a lesbian, placing my Great Purpose above all else.

I see this reflected in so many of the currently fashionable, failing TV shows and movies.
Women are not allowed to be women, and naturally, men are not allowed to be men. Any show of masculine strength and protectiveness has to be twisted into being a crime, and never interpreted or displayed properly.

Men themselves must be prepared to either be gay or to have no pairbond at all, and either to be a limp, sexless sidekick to a “strong woman” or a villain.

The question I am left with is “WHY?”

Where writers and showrunners natter on about representation and diversity, actual women, who make up most of the female half of the human race, find nobody to identify with. Sure, the character might be female, but they don’t act female. The character might be a lesbian, but how many lesbians are so masculinized that they are overtly promiscuous? The character might be black, but they are never allowed to be beautiful or feminine. How can a woman identify with someone who is nothing like who she is or what she wants to be?

For those of us who actually are strong women, even with a warlike background as I had (fencing champion, socialized to be masculine) there is one shining example of a woman we can really identify with: Cara Dune from The Mandalorian. She was strong, gorgeous, not overpowered, sensible, realistically able to grapple with actual men due to her training, and obviously loyal, kind, and yes, feminine under all that armor.

And what happened to her? She was sacked, despite being the most popular character on the show other than Baby Yoda. She was universally loved, by both women and men, and her firing resulted in countless people canceling Disney+, including me.

And still Batwoman is in her show, trying to “inspire” women to quit being women and to become bad imitations of the worst possible men.

Of course, there is a worse possibility. Queen Latifa, hilariously cast as “The Equalizer” is meant to inspire women of *cough* SIZE to believe they can go be action heroes just because.

And what happens when reality just refuses to cooperate?

Friday, January 29, 2021

Guest Post: N3F Publications Eligible for the Hugo Awards (Best Fanzine of 2020), by George Phillies

This week, I've decided to help George Phillies get the word out there about the apolitical National Fantasy Fan Federation (or N3F) and its available fanzines. Since he's welcomed me aboard as a contributor for Tightbeam, I figure it's the least I can do!

Note: George wrote these for a German website that ultimately rejected his submission for BS political reasons. What a shame.

The N3F Review of Books Incorporating Prose Bono 

Tell us about your site or zine. 

Perhaps the N3F Review of Books Incorporating Prose Bono is a modestly long name for a fanzine.  The idea for the N3F Review is entirely my creation.  I have the invaluable assistance of long-time Neffer Jean Lamb as Lady High Proofreader, and a large cast of contributors (see next question).  We are a fiction review zine, open in length; recent issues have run over 40 pages. We are always looking for more literate, sensible book reviewers. 

Who are the people behind your site or zine? 

The zine is published by The National Fantasy Fan Federation (founded 1941), the world's oldest continuously extant non-local SF club. Contributors, many of whom have their web sites, now include 

Declan Finn http://www.declanfinn.com 

Jason P. Hunt http://SciFi4Me.com   http://SciFi4Me.tv 

Mindy Hunt:  http://SciFi4Me.com   http://SciFi4Me.tv 

Patrick Ijima-Washburn http://patokon.com 

Jagi Lamplighter http://SuperversiveSF.com 

Jim McCoy http://JimbosSFFreviews.blogspot.com 

Chris Nuttall http://ChrisHanger.wordpress.com 

Pat Patterson http://Habakkuk21.blogspot.com 

George Phillies http://books-by-george.com 

Cedar Sanderson: http://www.CedarWrites.com 

Steven Simmons 

Tamara Wilhite also appears at http://LibertyIslandmag.com 

I am always looking for more reviewers, people who will write about the books, not the authors' political beliefs. (Sometimes this becomes challenging.) 

Why did you decide to start your site or zine? 

First, The National Fantasy Fan and Tightbeam for different reasons have fixed maximum lengths, namely 12 and 32 pages, so the number of book reviews we could publish was too limited.  I had more reviews than I could publish.  Second,  the N3F Review was created to fill a felt but unfulfilled need, namely to generate reviews of every published SF novel.  I spent a year contributing to the National Fantasy Fan a list new SF, Fantasy, horror, and occult novels. Ignoring stfnal romance novels, there were readily a hundred of these a month, not counting books from large and independent paper publishers, few of which were being reviewed. In addition, there are a lot of independently published -- indie -- writers whose work could be better.  (There are also a lot whose work is superb).  To serve these folks, I added Prose Bono (yes, there is a pun in there) to the mix.   There are rare volumes of STFnal literary criticism and the history of fandom.  Our own Harry Warner, Jr., wrote several of these.  Those we also review, under their own heading.  Finally, we accidentally acquired a continuing series of excellent author interviews, leaving us in the end with separate fiction, non-fiction, Prose Bono, and literary criticism sections. 

What format do you use for your site or zine (blog, e-mail newsletter, PDF zine, paper zine) and why did you choose this format? 

The N3F Review is circulated electronically to all N3F members; at latest count, there are over 300 of us.   The N3F Review format is PDF, 8.5 x 11", Times New Roman 12 point type (larger for titles and section headings), Front and Second page being the table of contents.  One somewhat narrow column appears on each page. Titles, author names, Section headings, and Table of Contents are in scarlet ink; all else are black.  Unlike some other fanzines, we deliberately publish absolutely no art. 

The fanzine category at the Hugos is one of the oldest, but also the category which consistently gets the lowest number of votes and nominations. So why do you think fanzines and sites are important? 

Fanzines are one of the important ways in which fen communicate with each other.  Yes, there are also fen who go to conventions, publish web sites and blogs, and the like, but fanzine fandom including efanzines are central to the hobby.  They are  how we find out what is happening in our wonderful hobby.  Having said that, why are there so few votes?  Because so few fen are connected in an extensive way to fanzine fandom.  That's why the N3F Fanzine Franking Service circulates the zines of other people to all Neffers.  I could complain about the extremely well-known fanzine site that refuses to list our zines, but there would be no point to doing that. 

In the past twenty years, fanzines have increasingly moved online. What do you think the future of fanzines looks like? 

Electronic. Some paper publishers.  A few people will take advantage of modern technology to generate full-color fanzines like our Tightbeam, but electronic, especially with increasing shipping costs. I've said all the following before: More and more, fanzines will be ezines.  Some paper zines will doubtless continue.  There has been an enormous improvement both in the quality of cheap paper printing and in the ease with which web sites and ezines can be produced.  If I were to return to 1941 with a copy of Tightbeam, most fen would find it impossible to believe – except for the tell-tale staple – that it was not a top-price prozine. 

The four fan categories of the Hugos (best fanzine, fan writer, fan artist and fancast) tend to get less attention than the fiction and dramatic presentation categories. Are there any awesome fanzines, fancasts, fan writers and fan artists you’d like to recommend? 

Among fan writers I would note our own Jon Swartz for historical articles and Pat Patterson for book reviews.  Our current artists are Alan White, Jose Sanchez, and Angela K. Walker; see covers of Tightbeam for their work. Among fanzines other than our own I would note Bob Jennings’ Fadeaway and Nic Farey’s The Incompleat Register, which incidentally leads you to many other fanzines.

Thursday, July 30, 2020

Guest Post: Introducing New Ships on DS9 & B5

Introducing New Ships on DS9 & B5

by Jon Del Arroz

The similarities of Deep Space 9 and Babylon 5 have been talked about quite a bit, and usually in arguments to talk about how one is so much better than the other, but I find their similarities to be something which drew me and still draws me to both shows like no TV has done since.

There really hasn’t been much in terms of sweeping space opera on the air, with a few exceptions here and there, and in recent decades everything has gotten so dark and edgy it’s been hard to watch.

But both of these shows managed to maintain a gripping pace while keeping their souls.

Each also had watershed events where the dynamic of the series changed because of the addition of ships to the conflict.

The first seasons of both shows had a very “police procedure” feel to them as they dealt with trouble on their stationary stations. It was divergent from the usual exploration tropes of Star Trek (even though DS9 did have a few episodes where they did their exploratory missions on runabouts), and what that did was serve to make the shows feel a little slower than their predecessors had been.

Both shows also ironically in their third seasons introduced warships into their arsenals to change the dynamic of the shows forever. Babylon 5 introduced The White Star, a ship for them to use against the overwhelming alien forces manipulating the younger species, and Deep Space 9 brought in the Defiant.

The pacing of the shows changed so quickly into one of frantic wartime melodrama. This is where I and many others connected to these shows, giving them their enduring legacy today. It was amazing, the station base plus the warship on the frontlines creates a dynamic which allows a show to really flex different storytelling muscles, but also to pull back and do less expensive shows “on station” which require less special effects budget. The result was a masterpiece of two series.

It’s something I haven’t seen really replicated in fiction, though it’s something I’ve thought about doing in my Stars Entwined universe, as I introduced Palmer Station (named after sci-fi writer David R. Palmer) to be a warfront location. I never got around to giving my characters a starship, though. Perhaps next season…

Sunday, July 26, 2020

Guest Post: Writing the FUN Back Into Reading


WRITING THE FUN BACK INTO READING
Richard Paolinelli

I’m not so sure what the exact date it was, but sometime in the not-so-distant past the powers that be decreed that readers of sci-fi and fantasy needed to be browbeaten. Suddenly, stories became angry. Readers were being scolded and made to feel bad about everything around them once they reached the end of the book/movie/show/game. Can they really be surprised to discover that people are turning away from these forms of entertainment in droves?

Fortunately, there is a band of rebels out there that are producing all sorts of sci-fi/fantasy content across multiple media. I am proud to count myself among their number. We call it “Superversive” and I’ve been talking about it a lot recently on my website: https://scifiscribe.com/category/superversive/. I’ve also created a growing list of Superversive authors, publishers and books: https://scifiscribe.com/superversive-publishers-authors/ and I’m running a weekly feature called Superversive Sunday Spotlight: https://scifiscribe.com/category/superversive-sunday/ where I interview a Superversive author. All of these wonderful people are creating new content that is enjoyable to read or play.

All of my books and short stories are written for the reader to have fun reading them. This is what I want when I take a break from day-to-day life: To be able sit back and enjoy a good book, game or show. Because I feel that we have enough reality beating us up every day as it is. Books, movies and games should offer some respite, a pleasurable escape from reality if even just briefly.

It’s the same approach I’ve taken with another weekly feature on my blog: The 1K Weekly Serial Series: https://scifiscribe.com/1k-serials/. Right now, I’m writing an epic, three-part, Star Trek Fan Fiction series. I’d always wanted to write a Star Trek novel, but with the current state of the Star Trek franchise I didn’t see a way to do it. J.J. Abrams’ reboot has all but killed the film franchise. Discovery and Picard are doing the same for the small screen.

So, when I discovered that fan fiction is allowed, with certain requirements I was more than happy to adhere to, I started writing the weekly series. The main character of the story is Bari Forelni, a Prince of Etalya. The Etalyians live for over three centuries which allows Bari’s story to begin in the Star Trek: Enterprise era (Part 1), continue into The Original Series era (Part 2) and conclude (?) during The Next Generation era (Part 3). But while Bari’s story is front and center, all three Enterprise crews will be well represented.

They will also be well respected, something the Abrams movies and the recent TV shows cannot claim. The bottom line is this: The stories will be as fun for the reader to read and they have been for me to write.

And that is always my ultimate goal no matter what I sit down to write: Have some fun.

Friday, July 24, 2020

Guest Post: Real Science in Modern SF

Real Science in Modern Science Fiction
By Stephanie Osborn

I’m a scientist. I have graduate and undergraduate degrees in four sciences, as well as various certifications in several others. I’m what is sometimes called a polymath. I worked for more than two decades in the civilian and military space programs (NASA and DoD), and then retired and started writing science fiction mysteries, using my background and education to enlighten my writing.

I also “consult” for other authors in my fields of expertise. This includes everyone from NYT best-selling authors to writers who haven’t yet finished their first novel, and everything in between. Sometimes this is fun, sometimes it’s challenging, and sometimes… it just gets plain weird.

Take that NYT author. I got an email saying, “Hey, Steph, I got this ship that has to be able to travel from X to Y, has to be able to execute this particular trajectory, and is gonna get into a battle with the Big Bads. What size power plant does it need to have?”

“Um, okay. How big is it? You know, how massive?”

“I dunno.”

“What’s its payload weight?”

“I dunno.”

“How fast does it have to move?”

“I dunno.”

Uhboy, I think. Well, I can always do some research and see what I can come up with that might help. After all, I can put some boundaries on all of that myself, based on what I already know.

So I spent a couple of days digging around looking, around writing my own books. I spent about half and half, writing mine, and researching his. Until one day I get another email.

“Oh, by the way, Steph, that ship has four two-petawatt energy weapons on it. Does that help?”

Facepalm. Because my researches all indicated that any one of those was a bigger power draw than the rest of the ship (which was not required to traverse interstellar space, as far as I knew, so had a relatively low power draw for general spacing).

“Um, yeah, that helps a lot. I think if you run with a nine- or ten-petawatt power plant, you’ll be good.”

Problem solved.

Then there was the author who wanted to have an asteroid hit an island in the ocean and take it out. So she estimated what she thought was a big enough asteroid to do that, and asked me to double-check it. So I did, because asteroid impacts has been a hobby of mine for years, and I was at one time on an impact effects mitigation working group. Based on all that, I knew her fictional asteroid was too big, but she wanted hard numbers, so I ran them.

“Um, hon,” I said, “you just wiped out the Pacific Rim.”

Eh. It was order-of-magnitude Chicxulub-sized. Not quite, or the whole planet woulda been in trouble. But close. She was boggled; she had no idea that a chunk of rock falling from the sky could pack that kind of kinetic energy. Well, to be honest, unless you’ve taken some serious physics in school, you won’t know that. And most people haven’t. Which is why I consult for other authors.

Most people don’t even realize how close Chelyabinsk, Russia came to disaster, some years back. That was a SMALL asteroid; I’d tend to term it a large meteorite, but these days those are considered just piddling little rocks like you’d skip across a creek. But the Chelyabinsk asteroid came in at a very shallow angle. The thermal stresses on it caused it to basically explode in atmosphere; that’s called a bolide. But the fact that it was traveling close to horizontal is what saved the city. If it had been inbound with a more vertical trajectory, the shock wave from the explosion, coupled with the bow shock through the atmosphere, would have hit straight down in a cone instead of spreading out, and flattened everything and everyone beneath it.

I had one publisher pop me a story she wanted me to evaluate for her. It involved a UFO coming in over DC. It’s been a few years, but as I recall, it came screaming in from space, directly over the city, didn’t slow down, crossed over the Capitol dome, swung around the Washington monument, and came to a screeching halt in front of the White House.

I explained to her – in some detail – that the bow shock from that stunt would probably have flattened the entire National Mall.

She went back to the author and told him to rewrite it. He refused. He said her subject-matter expert (me) didn’t know what he was talking about, because UFOs were all flying saucers that didn’t partake of normal physics, so of course his scenario was perfectly fine.

I asked if this was an inhabited spacecraft, and was told it was. Whereupon I explained that if they wanted to stay in one piece, even with advanced technology, there were certain things that HAD to be done. (One of those is not to stop dead from high speed unless you want your crew plastered as a layer of protoplasm on the forward bulkheads.) And if they were containing an environment suited to life, they had to have a certain physicality to the hull. And if the hull was a physical thing, then he’d just flattened the National Mall, complete with the Federal government. (Which might not necessarily be a bad thing. But it would be unfortunate, and somewhat inconvenient, at least for a while.)

The guy refused to change it – this was his first book and it was an unsolicited submission – and the publisher came back to me with, “What should I do? The rest of the book is decent…”

“Okay, stop and think for a minute,” I told her. “Fine, so the rest of the book is interesting. But would you really want the handling of him, when he’s just told you that he knows more than someone who spent multiple decades in the space program? Who did that sort of thing for a living? Who knows about re-entry, sonic booms and bow shocks, bleeding off speed/energy in roll reversals, and letting a Space Shuttle cool down before anyone approaches it once it’s at full stop on the ground? When he hasn’t done any of those things? If he’s this protective about the opening scene, how is he gonna be when it comes time to edit his whole manuscript?”

“Ooo,” she groaned. “Good point.”

He didn’t get a contract from her.

I remember one request for my help that didn’t go well, though I can’t remember who asked it. I was asked to verify some situation about a rotating space station, and determine what kind of rotation rate it needed to enable a certain thing to be observed out the ports, while at the same time providing X gravitational force equivalent. It took a bit of doing, because a rotating wheel station will not have the same simulated gravity at all distances from the center of rotation. I went off and dug up some data, and then ran some calculations. All told, it took a couple-three hours. The results I got indicated that he needed to modify his concept just a little, but I worked out what that modification needed to be, then presented him with the finished calculations and proposed tweaks. Nothing major, just some adjustments to station dimensions and a couple descriptive mods.

“Mm,” he said, looking at what I’d given him. “Nah, I think I’m just gonna go with it the way I wrote it.”

I was nice. I did NOT say, “Then why did you bother asking me?”

I also found myself much too busy to run any research for him after that.

I can go on and on like this, good and bad. Some fun, some cool, some disgustingly dismissive. (And don’t even ask me to get started on the “science” that gets presented in movies and TV. You won’t like the brick that comes hurtling out of your computer, tablet, or phone screen.)

Just remember several things when you read that “hard” SF novel. One, not all “hard” SF actually is. Two, it’s FICTION. We make stuff up; that’s WHY it’s fiction. Three, just because it’s a popular concept in SF doesn’t mean it actually works the way we’d like – or even works at all!
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Stephanie Osborn, award-winning Interstellar Woman of Mystery, is a 20+-year space program veteran with multiple STEM degrees. She has authored, co-authored, or contributed to some 50 books to date, including Burnout, Displaced Detective, Gentleman Aegis, and the Division One series, her take on the urban legend of mysterious people who make evidence...disappear. Book one of the Division One series, Alpha and Omega, is currently on sale in Kindle, and available in KU:


Sunday, April 19, 2020

Guest Post: Don't Mess with Dune

By Richard Paolinelli

Growing up as a kid, my first introduction to literary science fiction were the works of H.G. Wells and Jules Verne. I spent many an after-school hour at the public library reading those incredible stories.

But, once I got a little older, I encountered a new author and a book that cemented my love of reading science fiction for life. That book was Dune by Frank Herbert. As soon as I finished reading it I turned right back to the first page and started reading it again. The next five books in the series that Herbert wrote soon followed suit.

Over the years, I have probably read those six books, in order of course, at least twenty times. The depth and attention to detail of every facet of the universe Herbert created with Dune was amazing. You easily lost yourself in the stories, even after so many readings when you already knew all too well what was coming.

Herbert’s Dune inspired me to try to create my own universe. The first book in that attempt is When The Gods Fell. Now, I’m not about to tell you it is better than Hebert’s works, but it is filled with all of the political intrigue and mythology that Herbert wove into Dune.

I’m telling you this because later this year Dune will be released in theaters. When I heard that Dune was being redone I was ecstatic. David Lynch’s 1984 adaptation had an incredible cast. Unfortunately, it had David Lynch as the director. While he remained somewhat true to the original material, his outlandish style did not serve the material well. The movie overall was okay, but just okay.

The SYFY channel released a miniseries in 2000 that combined the first three books - Dune, Dune Messiah and Children of Dune. The casting was okay, but lacked some star power that paled in comparison to the 1984 cast. But they remained faithful to Herbert’s material and I thought they did well under the circumstances. Still, the first two attempts at adapting Dune fell short.

Fast forward to 2020. Brian Herbert (Frank’s son) and Kevin J. Anderson have expanded on Frank’s original six books over the years and I feel they have done a great job. News that they were involved in the film gave me hope that the third time would be the charm, especially when the cast and crew were announced.

Denis Villeneuve would direct, and after his work on Blade Runner 2049 I felt this meant a Dune that would stick to the original material like glue. Oscar Isaac as Duke Leto? Nice. Zendaya as Chani? Good! Timothee Chalamet as Paul? Okay, I haven’t seen him in action but he looked promising. Rebecca Ferguson as the Lady Jessica, Josh Brolin as Gurney Halleck, Dave Bautista as Beast Rabban, Jason Momoa as Duncan Idaho, Javier Bardem as Stilgar and Stellan Skarsgard as the Baron Harkonnen?

How sweet it is!

Sharon Duncan-Brewster as Liet-Kynes?

What in the name of Shai-hulud is this madness?

This has nothing to do with Duncan-Brewster as an actress. This has everything to do with screwing around with the original material and in what can only be assumed as a way to show the world how “woke” the film is.

Liet-Kynes is Chani’s father, not her mother. Liet-Kynes is the leader of the Fremen. In the Dune universe Herbert created, the Fremen are a desert-dwelling people with strict rules. One is they do not have women leading the tribes or their entire people. So gender-swapping Liet-Kynes makes no sense whatsoever.

This isn’t like the Battlestar Galactica reboot where Starbuck was also gender-swapped. All Starbuck was ever required to be was a kick-ass, hard-drinking, high-stakes gambling fighter pilot, male or female. So having Katee Sackhoff replace Dirk Benedict wasn’t a huge violation as long as she pulled it off, and she definitely pulled it off.

But Liet-Kynes can ONLY be a male in Herbert’s Dune universe. This decision to gender-swap the character is a terrible disservice to Herbert. And the claim cannot be made that it was done to bring a strong female character to the story.

The Lady Jessica is a very strong female character, as is Chani herself. The Reverend Mother Gaius Helen Mohiam is a very strong female character in the story. The Bene Gesserit order is an all-female army of warrior-priestesses with amazing abilities.

There is no shortage of strong females in the Dune universe. There was no need for this casting other than the obvious “Hey, look at how woke we are” by Villeneuve. Worse yet, it is disrespectful to Hebert himself to make a major change like this.

I have long disliked the tendency by Hollywood writers to attempt to write the story better than the original author did. If Hollywood is going to adapt a classic like this, then they should move heaven and earth to make sure they respect the original material.

If they cannot, then they should leave the original alone and create their own Dune-like universe with new characters. When I wrote When The Gods Fell, I did not attempt to rewrite Frank’s original. I would not disrespect Hebert or his legacy that way. I created my own universe.

If Villeneuve was incapable of showing the proper respect to Herbert’s work, he should never have agreed to direct this film. As a longtime fan of the Dune universe I am very disappointed because if they are willing to violate the original material like this one instance, what else are they going to change? Will it even be the Dune that Hebert created by the time they are done?

Sadly, is seems that the Dune reboot we deserved is not the Dune reboot we are going to get in December.

To buy When The Gods Fell and other books by Richard Paolinelli, visit his website.

Friday, April 17, 2020

Guest Post: Star Trek and the Frontier of Bad Decisions

By Karina Fabian

Space, the final frontier.

These are the voyages of the USS Enterprise. It’s mission: to seek out new life and new civilizations; to hide really bad tactical and strategic decisions behind enlightened philosophic*; to boldly go where… did we really have to go there?


*spelled intentionally

Having led with that, let me explain that I am a die-hard Star Trek fan. My husband and I almost met at a Star Con because he saw my award-winning poem about Klingon eating habits, and our fandom directly led to a friend introducing us years later. Some of my first published writings were fanfic. (For the kiddies, this was before Paramont got snippy about copyrights, and “slash” was something you hid from the children instead of teaching in schools.) I was over the moon when Next Generation first aired.

Fast forward four kids, five series and a world gone insane later. I still love Star Trek. I love the characters. I love the aliens. I love DS9. But – wow! Some of the decisions the command crew makes! I cringe, but more often than not, my husband and I yell at the TV.

About three years ago, I started a web series that is a Star Trek/science fiction parody: Space Traipse: Hold My Beer. Inspired by a Tumbr thread where it’s decided that humans run the Federation because we’re the only species nuts enough to do things like throw a warp drive at a star just to see what happens, it was my escape from the stress of my life. It’s also an opportunity to apply some common sense while still having room for plenty of nonsense – like throwing a couple of warp cores into a star to see what happens. (Answer: You can change the laws of physics!)

With the pandemic, we’ve been binge-watching Next Gen, and it has officially earned its place at the very bottom of my list of favorite Star Treks (Except Discovery Season 1 where they weren’t in the mirror universe). I’m not going to get into the politics of it, aside from saying that any liberal who claims that we never addressed sexuality issue X or identity issue Y needs to go back and watch. Instead, let’s talk stupid decisions:

There’s a stun setting for a reason: How many injuries, ship takeovers, and hostage situations could they have resolved by stunning first and asking questions later? My security chief, Enigo LaFuentes, has a philosophy: Headaches Save Lives. Klingon with a bat’leth? Stun him. Hostage situation? Stun them both. Ask a stupid question in a safety briefing? That headache will teach you better.

Guess which ship has the highest redshirt survival rate in HuFleet?

Prime Directive vs. Common Sense:
We know this is practically a joke, a trope to add drama, but the bad decision making behind the Prime Directive is painful. Probably the best (worst) example of Prime Directive Stupidity is “Homeward,” where Worf’s foster brother sneaks an entire village onto the holodeck because – get this – their entire planet is going to be destroyed but the Federation won’t do anything because it will interfere with the natural progression of the species.

The whole planet. Gone. No survivors.

But they have the right to develop naturally!



Yeah, okay. So, Sorvino does the courageous thing and tries to save the one village and get them transplanted to an otherwise empty planet. Backed against a corner, Picard lets Worf pose as a seer and lead them on a Holodeck Trek to their new village which “is so far away even the stars are different.” And now, he’s part of the recorded history. Because just knocking them all out with anestesin gas , dropping them off and letting them credit “the gods” isn’t on the table.

Speaking of histories… Worf lets the historian run off unaccompanied, and he ends up wandering around the ship totally freaked out. They can’t wipe is memory so instead of knocking him out – Headaches save lives! – and letting him attribute it to a hallucination or vision, they tell him everything.

Everything.

Then they tell him he can stay, he can hide the truth, or he can be considered insane. Because making up some kind of lie about having a vision would interfere with the natural development of his people.

So he kills himself. And Jean Luc Archeologist Picard is sad because he wanted him to stay and tell him about his people – you know, the ones Picard was ready to let die in a planetwide disaster to preserve their way of life.

Okay, I get a little spun at the hypocrisy, which seems to be the general theme when the Prime Directive is part of the plot. Let’s move on…

That’s odd, but I won’t mention it:
How many crises – how many! – could have been averted if someone had just reported their strange symptoms to Sickbay (looking at you, Counselor Troi), or called for a sensor sweep when they heard that strange noise twice? In the Space Traipse universe, there’s a race called the Actuaries that made a systemic study of the most likely scenarios that lead to a starship disaster. Two of the major indicators is someone saying, ”Never mind. It’s stupid,” or “It must be my imagination.”

The fact that people still love these shows and watch them again and again despite obvious common sense flaws says a lot for how the stories and characters can reach our hearts. However, imagine how much better these shows would be at getting their point across if the viewer wasn’t screaming, “stun him!” or rolling their eyes at a long-winded justification for a bad decision when viable alternatives exist. To quote my “favorite” TOS episode “Brain, brain! What is brain?”

We have brains. So do our characters. It’s more fun when they use them.

If anyone is interested in reading the adventures of the HMB Impulsive, you can check out the first-draft, proofing-is-for-the-weak versions on my website or get the more polished but equally fun story collections from Amazon.

Thanks, Karina! And by the way, speaking of the Prime Directive in particular, may I suggest you also read my own thoughts?

Saturday, February 2, 2019

Three Miscellaneous Stories: Abortion, Northam's Yearbook, & Amelie Zhao

Let's launch this weekly post with some guest commentary from my BF regarding the proposed changes to Virginia's abortion laws (which fortunately failed to pass):

"Yes, Abortion is Murder. Thank You for Admitting as Much.

"First off, the disclaimer: This post is not about the abortion law in New York. I have yet to read the thing. No, this is a post about the law recently proposed in Virginia by Democrat Kathy Tran. (Ed. As it turns out, the New York law is even more extreme. And the celebration of its passage was absolutely vomit-inducing.) This, as we shall see, is proof that not only have supporters of abortion rights been lying to us since the days when states made their own rules about abortions, but this never was about a 'right to privacy,' it was never about 'healthcare,' and it was never about 'regulating women's bodies.' No, the argument in support of abortion rights is, and always has been, about avoiding responsibility. It is murder with the intent to remove an economic and physical requirement for raising another human being.

"Virginia governor Ralph Northam has stated that the bill would allow abortions while a woman was in labor and dilating. (Ed. Actually, Tran said this under questioning. Not that Northam's defense of the bill was any less reprehensible.) Here's the thing: There is no difference in the effect on a woman's body between delivering and aborting a baby at that point. Seriously. None.

"I'm not ignorant of the possible negative effects of pregnancy. I am aware that it hasn't been all that long since death due to complications of childbirth was the most common cause of death for women in this country. In my personal life, I watched my ex-wife (we were married at the time) hospitalized for pre-eclampsia after the birth of my daughter Cecilia. I saw how panicked the doctor was when she resisted getting treatment. I know what's at stake here.

"But when you're talking about aborting a viable baby at the point of birth you're not talking about healthcare. It would have done my ex no good if they had murdered my daughter before delivering her. The effects on her body would have been precisely the same. No, what you're talking about is a blatant dodge of parental responsibility.

"Barack Obama said it best: 'If one of my daughters made a mistake, I wouldn't want them punished with a baby.'

"He wasn't speaking of the cost to his daughters and their bodies. He wasn't talking about their health. He was talking about them avoiding the consequences of their actions.

"And that's what this really is. There is no difference between killing a child whose mother is in the process of delivering them and leaving that same child in a plastic bag in the hospital dumpster a day later. None.

"Here's my other favorite argument in favor of abortion:

"'Well, if I have my child, you don't want to give me welfare to raise it, or pay for its college, or..'

"And the other variant: 'It's cheaper for society to pay for an abortion than it is to pay for welfare to raise the child.'

"Once again, what you're talking about is not healthcare. They're not referencing a woman's right to her own body. They're talking about how they shouldn't have to pay for their own offspring and shouldn't be forced to raise the kids they created. That's what this really is.

"Under these circumstances, there is no difference between a mother getting an abortion and Rae Carruth's murder of his pregnant girlfriend. He killed her because he didn't want to pay child support. That is what these women are doing. They're murdering people over money. The fact that they're willing to abort children at the point of birth proves it. They've already carried the child to term. The incisions necessary to abort a child and perform a C-section are identical. The effect on the woman's body is identical.

"Are there reasons for a woman to avoid birth other than economic? Sure. I know a woman (who shall remain nameless) who is white. She was married to a white man. She got a black boyfriend and got pregnant with his child. There was not going to be a way to hide the fact that it was not her husband's child. She sought an abortion because she didn't want her husband to know what she had done. Ultimately, she did the right thing and had the child. I'm proud of her for doing the right thing and walking out of the clinic under the effects of the drugs they had given her before they were going to give her anesthesia.  For the record, she had a ride home. Someone had gone with her. That's a good thing too.

"The point of telling that story, though, is this: She was still trying to avoid the consequences of her actions. She knew what would happen if her husband found out she had been cheating. She did it anyway and then thought to hide evidence. Mob bosses order the murder of witnesses to crimes all the time. There is no difference.

"So honestly, thank you, abortion advocates. Now that you have openly admitted that abortion is about neither healthcare or a woman's right to her own body, we can have an open and honest discussion in this country. We can finally talk about the truth: It's all about the money, baby. It's all about a life free from consequences. Abortion isn't about Women's Rights or healthcare. It's about murdering children because they cost too much. Thank you for finally revealing your true though processes. You've been very helpful.

"And know this: There are those of who are not surprised by this. We always knew what it was about. And understand what I am about to tell you:

"I am the implacable enemy of all abortion advocates. I am the implacable enemy of all who commit abortions. I see your murders for what they are. I do not seek compromise or consensus. I seek the abolition of legalized murder in the United States. And no, I'm not interested in helping women who would get illegal abortions avoid the consequences of their actions either.  Stop murdering people. And stop lying about your motivations. We're not dumb enough to believe you." - Jim

(Ed. And to those who object to the sentiments above and insist that the proposed changes to Virginia's laws wouldn't allow abortion on demand at any time for any reason, changing the language from "the continuation of the pregnancy is likely to result in the death of the woman or substantially and irredeemably impair the mental or physical health of the woman" to "likely to result in the death of the woman or impair the mental or physical health of the woman" leaves the door wide open for just that very thing. Removing "substantially and irredeemably" means just about anything can justify even a third trimester abortion so long as one doctor - ONE - agrees to sign off on the procedure. If this had passed, it would've definitely been abused by the unscrupulous.)

*****

Now Let's Talk About Governor Northam's Yearbook Photo

I actually don't believe in torching a political career over an offensive photo taken more than thirty years ago. I hate this Culture of No Forgiveness - birthed by the Twitter Mob - in which all violators of the new social mores receive the same brutal punishment with no sense of proportion, no statute of limitations, and no possibility for parole (so to speak). I hate it, first of all, because I'm Christian and therefore believe everyone should be provided an avenue to redemption. But I also hate it because it flies in the face of our entire legal tradition. Does it make sense to give petty thieves and grand larcenists the same sentences? No? Then the guy who once, decades ago, stupidly donned blackface or a Klan hood to be edgy shouldn't be treated the same as the guy who's consistently expressed racist sentiments over many years up to and including the present day. In the former case, an apology is sufficient penance.

Of course, I don't have a lot of sympathy for Northam -- especially since he's now walking back his apology and denying that he's actually in that photo. And given that he's embraced the rhetoric of SJW "anti-racist" activism in the past, I must admit to enjoying a little schadenfreude watching him suffer the consequences of his own ideas. Definitely a banner story for Glenn Reynolds' "Annals of Leftwing Autophagy"!

*****

Meanwhile, in the World of Publishing...

… we have the unfortunate story of Amelie Zhao, who pulled her debut YA fantasy novel from her publisher's schedule after she was attacked by SJW's for her supposed "anti-black racism".

Obviously, I have not read Zhao's book - I'm not one of those YA "influencers" who gets access to ARC's - but based on her own explanations, it sounds like her intention was to portray slavery in Asia, not the Americas. No matter: the totalitarians went after her anyway because she didn't tackle slavery the "right" way.

According to the SJW Mean Girls, you see, a YA author should look like she stepped out of an advertisement for the United Colors of Benetton -- but she must think like everyone else. No going off the script. No bucking the strictures of the industry's "sensitivity" hucksters. No going out on a limb to tell an honest story that hasn't been filtered through dozens of political sieves until it has all the flavor of purified water. You will write the one novel the provincial radical left wants you to write or you will be declared one of the untermenschen.

Obviously, this whole affair pisses me off. As a matter of fact, Larry Correia's characteristically pungent post on the subject captures my feelings precisely. How dare these witches bully this poor author into abandoning her dream -- and how dare they keep this book from the rest of us! I say we let the publisher know that we won't stand for this censorship-through-intimidation. The pre-order page for Zhao's book is still up; go and make her a best-seller.

Monday, May 8, 2017

Guest Post: On Climate Change, Environmental Left Hates Common Sense Solutions, by SABR_Matt

In which my brother, a credentialed meteorologist, shares his thoughts on climate change. 

I recently read a tweet by Bernie Sanders suggesting that if we cut carbon emissions by "just" 32% by 2030, we'd save 3600 premature babies from death each year.

Without going into the dark corner of his colon from which Bernie extracted that number or deliberating for too long as to whether there is any link at all between climate change and premature birth/death rates, this tweet reveals everything that is wrong with the way the environmental left thinks in three easy steps.

Before we get to the meat, I just want to have a little fun with a link. Here is a listing of the bizarre things that the greenies have linked to global warming:


Alright, back to the meat of this post. The three phases of stupid liberal logic on climate change are:

1) Find a problem in society and concoct a clever-sounding but unproven pseudo-logical link between that problem and climate change. No evidence is needed to make your claim, only a false tautology. IF (a) might be occasionally caused by (b) and (b) might be influenced by climate change in some way, then all of (a) is caused by climate change!

2) Depict your carbon emission cutting idea as a simple matter. (Only 32% cut by 2030, hmm? How much money will that cost, Bernie? How many countries will play along with your game or could even afford to? Will China cooperate? India? How many lives will be lost due to lost economic progress in places that need cheap energy to escape the third world?)

3) When someone disagrees, claim that they hate premature babies, poor people, and puppies and want all of them to die in a world set on fire by climate change, conveniently ignoring the dozens of far less costly alternatives to your emission curbing regulatory uber-state, even if you believe that AGW is a serious threat.

So, Bernie, let me ask you and your cotton-headed socialist pals why you are only focusing on the idea that is the most difficult to implement, requires total global cooperation, is projected to make little to no difference even if all goes according to plan, costs trillions of dollars to enact, and requires a massive international regulatory state? Oh: I just answered my question, didn't I?

But in seriousness, here are four other ways to combat climate change if you really care about the issue and want to see us meet it head on because you think it's a threat to our survival.

1) Widespread adoption of nuclear energy.

The left rejects this in North America because it feels less safe and dirtier than solar panels, but the reality is quite different. Solar farms murder hundreds of thousands of birds every year, wind farms are creating the greatest animal holocaust mankind has ever mustered if you go by the death count, and the resources and industrial power needed to build, maintain, and replace turbines and solar panels is enormous and creates a lot of pollution on its own. Meanwhile, nuclear technologies now exist that would reduce radioactive byproducts down to absolutely minuscule quantities and potency.

2) Reforestation

I remember, growing up in the 80s, when the left was very excited about saving the rain forests. Don't you? Ironically, though their proposed method for doing so was completely impractical and though we make fun of them for backing efforts to save rain forests only to make themselves look good, they were right. It turns out that the rain forests are a far more important climate driver than CO2 emissions ever could be. The conversion of evapotranspiring, moderate-albedo old-growth rain forests into low albedo, brown grazing lands that release little moisture back to the atmosphere has contributed to the "great dimmening" we've observed by satellite - a phenomenon where the planet is reflecting less and less solar radiation back to space and, thus, heating up. It also turns out that kneecapping the rain forests has reduced nature's capacity for draining CO2 out of the air.

If they want to fight climate change, environmentalists should fight for reforestation efforts. You wouldn't need one world government to do it; you'd need several international corporations and some minimal government investment, and you'd have broad international nonpartisan support for your aims. If the biosphere were 10% greener, at a cost many MANY orders of magnitude lower than emission curbing regulations, the climate would cool significantly -- much more significantly than the IPCC projections for CO2 emission curbing.

3) CO2 reuptake mechanisms

There are multiple competing ideas for pulling CO2 out of the air and converting it to usable forms of carbon and O2 or water vapor. The only reason such ideas haven't progressed enough to become profitable, one might argue, is that they are getting absolutely no research support. Why is the environmental left so reluctant to let our technological genius solve this problem rather than our governments?

4) Adaptation

If you can't beat climate change (and there are some on the left who think we waited too long and now can't), then why are you still trying to beat climate change? Why not work on ways to make the staple animal and food crops and natural biomes of our planet heartier and more prepared for climate shifts in any direction? Or are you saying that the species that, time after time after time, defeated the population/food shortage problem by getting smarter about how to grow food can't keep innovating?

Now I don't think that climate change is any real threat to imperil humanity or even to catastrophically alter Earth's biosphere, but I would not stand in the way of *common sense* risk mitigation strategies like the above, nor would most conservatives. The "precautionary principle" argument the left uses to defend drastic policy action w/r/t climate change only makes sense if your solution carries less risk than doing nothing. For me to buy in, you have to either convince me that the alternative really is totally catastrophic (You have a long road there. I'm a climate scientist, and I have studied the problem and don't see it as something that is likely to be a bigger priority than a productive economy), or you need to make your recommended action low-risk. Breaking the economy and reducing global populations isn't low-risk; it's ridiculously high-risk. But I'll gladly take precautions against potential climate-related problems if the precautions are rational. Reforestation is cheap and has other guaranteed benefits. Nuclear power is a long term solution to MANY energy related issues and geopolitical tensions. Making us more adaptive to changing climates is a good thing to do anyway!  So -- why aren't we doing any of that?

In short, there is only one true answer.  None of those alternatives give the left the power to control and regulate the global economy and population.

And that -- is why you'll never have buy-in from me and why none of their chest-thumping about the issue phases me at all.

Monday, March 13, 2017

Guest Post: A Crazy World, by Dawn Witzke

Today, let's welcome author Dawn Witzke. Below, Dawn shares some of the process behind her latest novel, Path of Angels, which is now out on Amazon. My own review, meanwhile, will be posted soon!


A Crazy World Created From Conspiracy Theories and Partisan Politics

When I was developing the world that becomes Path of Angels, I was spending quite a bit of time debating law, politics and culture online. This led me to doing a ton of research about things that I was familiar with, but needed specifics in order to support my opinion.

There was also a lot of jaw flapping about Texas seceding, people relocating to states with other like-minded people, talk of religious persecution and even civil war. It was mostly just hot air. Few people ever did more than talk.

I decided to start exploring the what ifs with all of these ideas. What if Hillary became president? What if the government started censoring religions and/or shutting them down? What if the socialists got the government to provide basic needs for everyone? What if marriage continued on the path it was going and no one got married anymore? These were just a few of the many questions that I asked.

Being a paralegal, I just couldn’t force myself to morph our government into the crazy that I needed for my story. So....I started a war. The Great War happens after Jane Elliot Brown wins the presidency in 2020. She is so incompetent that the economy crashes setting off a chain of events that leads to a complete change of borders around the world. Thirty-five years later the April Compact is signed, restoring an uneasy peace and marking the beginning of the New Era.

Creating Borders

I needed to figure out this new world and where the borders would be, what type culture they would have, and what sort of government would function in those countries. The first thing that I did was to take my hostility out on California and have it traded to the Chinese in trade for forgiveness of a large portion of the US debt. Then, I broke the mainland into about 8 or so other smaller countries. In the east is New England. The south rose again in the New Confederacy. Obviously Texas still remained and expanded, North Gates, in the northwest, is a privately owned country by none other than Bill Gates.

The Government of Nacerma

In the heartland is Nacerma. This is where I had my real fun. I started with the basic idea of a country that provides every citizen with the basics - food, clothing, shelter, medical care - in exchange for 5 years of service in an assigned government job. I threw in a bit of fascism by having the government control and monitor all communication mediums, weapons and industry. Then some communism in how certain people are more equal than others. Last, but not least, I throw in some capitalism in two forms. The first being the Council that runs the country, which is loosely based on a Board of Directors. Secondly, there are some “privately-owned” businesses, which are set-up similar to a franchise, except that the owner has to go through the government for everything rather than a private entity.

Thrown into this Frankenstein’s monster of a government are a mess of cultural ideas that are a mix of liberal and conservative. Of course I chose the ones that each side hates the most.

Society and Culture

Children/abortion/euthanasia: There are no set laws on the number of children a mother can have, however the government will only provide for up to two children per woman, who have sole responsibility for their care and upbringing. During a woman’s service with the government, they can either be arrested for getting pregnant or be forced to have an abortion. Abortions are available the entire pregnancy for the asking and infants who are born with defects are aborted. Euthanasia is encouraged and requires nothing more than a person presenting themselves at a medical center and making the request.

Relationships/marriage: There is no government marriage at all. Relationships last as long as any two people decide to have one, which results in almost no commitment between people. Also, there are very few restrictions on what people may do. Age of consent is 18, although there is a Romeo clause, which allows an age gap of up to 2 years where at least one is a minor.

Religion/Speech: Religion of all types is strictly banned and severely penalized. Speech has limits only when it comes to criticizing the government. There is no such thing as hate speech, defamation of character or slander/libel.

Those are the major components of this new country Nacerma. It’s a hot mess, but it works.

Path of Angels is out March 13th at Amazon.com.