Vengeance is intended to be the first book of series, so fair warning: You will find no satisfying resolution here just yet. What you will find is a lot of set-up. You get the sense, for example, that Shaw's antagonists are cooperating with the enemy, but by the end of the novel, you are no closer to understanding the motivations behind their betrayal of their own government than you were at the start. It is also strongly suggested that Shaw's final mission before her imprisonment resulted in a great deal of collateral damage, but here too, the full story is withheld.
I also feel, personally, that Schall's writing is repetitive in parts. Once you've shown that the guards at the aforementioned prison have been violating regs and abusing their prisoners - including Shaw herself - the point doesn't have to be belabored. Similarly, once you've established that Shaw is determined to protect the other members of her team, you don't need to keep mentioning her loyalty in the narration. Shaw's actions should hammer the idea home just fine. Indeed, I think it's better for a character's behavior to speak for itself.
Still, the incompleteness and occasional redundancy aside, the larger story launched by Vengeance has potential. In particular, I'm hoping that future installments will tell us more about Fuercon's internal and external enemies. How did their conflict with Fuercon arise, and what exactly do they want? If the next book offers more back-story and more world building, I will be even more engaged in Shaw's story and more eager to see her succeed.
Final Verdict: Recommended, But With Notes
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